Anniversaries (Writing task)

So this weeks writing task was on Anniversaries. I think this is my weakest effort yet, but for completeness, I shall put it here.

 

My partner and I aren't married, and see little reason to get married. When our relationship started, there was a very grey area between friends & lovers that spanned a few months, so we don't really have an anniversary. What we do celebrate is the anniversary of when we first spoke to each other. Six months of seeing each other at milongas & classes, not a word. Then at one tango bar, at the edge of a crowded dance floor we see each other, and she simply says, "I think you're the only regular I haven't danced with, mind if I ask you for a dance next time I see you?"
The rest, as they say, is history.